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Ron noticed it first, because Harry was always cold.

Harry had never been cold. He was a furnace, alive and angry and always fighting and generating enough heat for all three of them when times were hard. But now Harry was cold, and hard, and seemed not to have any emotions of his own. He watched carefully, and stared glassily at them, and reflected what he saw in their eyes.

Snape noticed because the boy seemed to have given up, never rose to his insults, merely smiled that infuriating half-smile and hid behind Snape's reflection in his glasses.

Remus always looked a little harder at people, checking for the first signs of rejection. He was sure Harry's scar had always been in a different place.

Dumbledore pressed his hand against the mirror and sighed gently, breath clouding the cool glass.

"This was why I hid it from you, Harry." His eyes were tired, but he had lost all the tears he had to spare.

Harry smiled through the glass, even though the hands on his shoulders were cold.

Date: 2004-06-18 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] turtlespeaks.livejournal.com
That is spoooky! *shivers* That's all I can say! *is a little disturbed*

What is really spooky is that I can see Harry doing something like that.

Date: 2004-06-18 04:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] atdelphi.livejournal.com
Ooh...eerie. I love it :-)

Date: 2004-06-18 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kleenexwoman.livejournal.com
I may be kind of slow on the uptake, but I don't get it...

Date: 2004-06-18 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darketherdream.livejournal.com

I don't know what it is, but I like it. But then I've been reading Joyce.

Date: 2004-06-18 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tammaiya.livejournal.com
I had to reread it to get it, but DAMN. That is VERY cool. And very creepy. And... so something Harry would actually do. *shiver*

Date: 2004-06-19 01:08 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ashen_key
...oh.

That is so creepy. So good. Very, very cold.

Date: 2004-06-19 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
Hee, thanks. I'm glad... well, that you were disturbed by it, 'cos that was my intention. Not that I'm a sadist or anything... *g*

Date: 2004-06-19 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
Thankee, lady.

Date: 2004-06-19 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
Harry's swapped places with his reflection in the Mirror of Erised. :D

Date: 2004-06-19 05:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it.

*I* like your icon. :D

Date: 2004-06-19 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
It does seem like him, doesn't it? Harry is an inch away from snapping completely a lot of the time, and I can't blame him for it. Poor boy.

Thanks for the comment.

Date: 2004-06-19 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darketherdream.livejournal.com

ah, wonderful steerpike icons. There aren't ever enough of them.

Date: 2004-06-19 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
Cheers, love. I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2004-06-19 08:31 am (UTC)

Date: 2004-06-19 10:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kleenexwoman.livejournal.com
Oh.
OH. Ok.

Wow, that is a bit disturbing.

Date: 2004-06-23 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com
Wow. Creeeeepy!

I noticed all the mirror references, words...but didn't *get* it right off. I would have had I read it a bit more and thought, but I was so curious, I read the comments. Yikes!!

It takes on a whole new . . .facet, I suppose, when read again, knowing what Harry has done. How very effective and superbly chilling! That Harry would choose to switch places with his reflection, live on with his parents' reflections, rather than face the world and his life. How very sad and depressing and disturbing.

I really love this. You have really done something here, in so few words...while drunk ;) hehehe
Bravo!

*puts in memories*


Isobel

Date: 2004-06-24 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
Well thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Cheers for the extensive review- I'm impressed, it's almost as long as the snippet! *g*

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