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Feb. 8th, 2005 12:21 pmPoetry I wrote a long time ago.
wasp in an exam hall
distracting a hundred creaking minds
trying not to watch the clock
not to wait for the next tick...
tock...
the next movement of a hand
over paper
bleeding thoughts neatly.
wasp
in an exam room
looking to escape
but windows are a distraction
wasp in an exam hall
distracting a hundred creaking minds
trying not to watch the clock
not to wait for the next tick...
tock...
the next movement of a hand
over paper
bleeding thoughts neatly.
wasp
in an exam room
looking to escape
but windows are a distraction
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Date: 2005-02-08 01:22 pm (UTC)XD
though that last line irks me. it seems like there's a sylable too many.
Not that I know anything much about poetry, that's just how it seems to me.
Still, much of the coolness. *applauds*