That was incredibly powerful and lovely. And heart-wrenching. It took me a bit to understand what was happening, that the first part was the Beginning, but after that, excellent. I especially liked the Judas bit, that was really really strong. Very nice job!
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Date: 2005-03-05 08:07 am (UTC)