100 words

Nov. 5th, 2010 06:45 am
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She gave him the keys, took down the sign;
He grinned on the threshold and christened it ‘Mine’.
But Ours was breathed, enough to be heard –
Such fear inspired by just that word!
He wasted no time, sent for a priest;
He needed to call this ‘Mine’ at least.
But that night as he rested his head,
Ours was breathed at the foot of his bed.
Outraged, infuriated, ‘MINE!’ he cried
But Ours as he tripped on the stairs, as he died.
When the realtor came he realised Not mine,
But Ours, they vowed, as she put up the sign.

Date: 2010-11-05 08:46 am (UTC)
catwalksalone: happy grey cat surrounded by flowers (Default)
From: [personal profile] catwalksalone
Ohhh, creepy. I like it.

Date: 2010-11-05 10:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
A fully realized ghost story in 100 words - awesome! O_O

Date: 2010-11-05 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theninth.livejournal.com
And verse!

Date: 2010-11-05 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theninth.livejournal.com
HOW ARE YOU SO AWESOME. Seriously.

Date: 2010-11-05 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strangecreature.livejournal.com
How did you manage to pull that off in100 words?? This is terrific!

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