...good lord, I become quite horrifically English when I'm panicking, don't I?
You do! It's kind of cute. :)
Anyway -- I don't write smut either as a general rule, but I can give you advice that's helped me in the past on occasions when I had no idea how to start the section I was trying to write.
Pick a single inanimate object in the scene and describe it. Not necessarily an object of any particular significance to the events, and not in any fulsome detail, just a simple visual. Furniture's good for this sometimes.
This may not help at all for this kind of scene, but I thought I'd toss it at you and see if maybe it did. :)?
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Date: 2007-05-20 06:11 pm (UTC)You do! It's kind of cute. :)
Anyway -- I don't write smut either as a general rule, but I can give you advice that's helped me in the past on occasions when I had no idea how to start the section I was trying to write.
Pick a single inanimate object in the scene and describe it. Not necessarily an object of any particular significance to the events, and not in any fulsome detail, just a simple visual. Furniture's good for this sometimes.
This may not help at all for this kind of scene, but I thought I'd toss it at you and see if maybe it did. :)?