Ooohhhhhh. Fun. I like this a lot, dear. Especially Stephen's reactions to both angel and demon (and how Mr. Fell makes him wish his "soul was more presentable"). Made me giggle, the end made me smile, and I like how nicely the relationship between Stephen and Jack mirrors Aziraphale and Crowley: most of it an unspoken, inarguable arrangement.
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Date: 2006-08-25 08:28 pm (UTC)Lovely. Yay!