I don't even know. It just came into my head and had to be written down and I am kinda hoping I can avoid using it but there needs to be tension and there needs to be something more than just conversation in order to the end to actually mean something other than 'oh they are friends rah' and and and wah!
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Date: 2007-05-13 04:21 pm (UTC)MORE OF THAT PLZ.
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Date: 2007-05-13 04:25 pm (UTC)"I just - " Rodney's voice was smaller than John'd ever heard it, low and somehow lost. "I just think about you."
John's throat tightened like there was a fist around it, choking him.
"Yeah," he managed, his voice husky and cracked somewhere around the edges. Carefully, deliberately, he put the phone down.
WHAT WHAT WHAT WHY WHAT I HATE MY BRAIN
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Date: 2007-05-13 05:20 pm (UTC)WHAT WHAT WHAT *GRASPS*
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Date: 2007-05-13 06:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-05-13 06:42 pm (UTC)*stares at fic helplessly*
I'll work it out.
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Date: 2007-05-13 06:45 pm (UTC)