Thinkin'

[nny]

I think the major problem with my fiction is that it's so poorly lit. You can make out the head, and the movement of the hands, you know without question who they are and what they're doing, and the voices that come out of the darkness are undoubtedly them, but expressions and moods are dim and indistinguishable, and the environment is barely there at all.

Comments

[mashimero]

Haha that's exactly how I wrote when I used to write stories.